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True Flight

The One








Since: 08-21-04

Since last post: 588 days
Last activity: 572 days
Posted on 08-10-10 10:26 AM Link | Quote
Heavy,
Boots are so heavy,
Not as heavy as my shoulders,
Exhausting,
Carrying the world on my shoulders,
I want to cry when I see their faces,
They are so happy,
They suffer so much,
We give and give,
Yet it seems nothing has helped stop the attacks,
Scared,
The alarm sounds and I hide under concrete,
What will happen next?
I can't see,
Nothing,
Nothing heard,
No explosion.
Hot,
Just like every day,
Walking to work in the heat,
In my heavy boots.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 29 days
Last activity: 29 days
Posted on 08-12-10 09:29 AM Link | Quote
Simple, yet good. I especially like the beginning. The line about the attacks seems a bit long and deracts a bit from the flow, but that is the only real criticism I can make.
Jakob98

Micro-Goomba
Banned








Since: 09-09-11

Since last post: 2368 days
Last activity: 1928 days
Posted on 11-11-11 02:33 PM Link | Quote
Nice poem
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