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Rauni
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Aside from what you said above, I am going to comment on how she look like Samus mixed with Lara Croft with a bit of Rogue's snazzy outfit...

OH MY GOD, she looks like Samus mixed with Lara Croft with a bit of Rogue's snazzy outfit! *Ahem* Anyway, since this seem more of the rough sketch phase, I can't really give you any CC aside from what you already have criticized on yourself. If I have to, yes, the shoulder seem broad and just slightly above the hip seem like she trying to wear one of those skirt that make your stomach smaller (the name escape me), and the gun seem like you provide a nice detail, but is still sorely lacking in further most detail.

In short, the gun is really bothering me for some reasons. I hope if that was any help.
The Accidental Protege
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Yeah; just a random sketch.
Her left shoulder seems too broad, and the foreshortening on the left arm needs some fine tuning, and her lower half is a bit small. I gotta fix that.
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