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Kyoku kun
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Here ya go! I put a background in and everything.


Hope ya like!
Bjornen
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Thanks for both the pros and the cons. Need them both. And i will trye to work on it. I didn't see this before, i just felt like somthing was off. And now i see what. So thanks a bunch.

The knife, not sure what you are saying here... I started with just a white brackground and drew it from scratch. Didn't start with anny picture of anny knife.

You've been a good help
Rauni
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Please, excuse me for any behavior I displays. I am usually like this so I'll apologize for any letdown I created.

-Werewolf-
The body (I would say that the chest area the most, since the arm and the leg are prefect) seem flat. I don't know why but it seem flat to me. To avoid this, I believe that the shade should be of different then the skin's default tone. It seems that the shading might have accidentally merges the 3-D effect. So if the next time to draw comes, try to make the abs area lighter/darker depending on the lighting effect.

I'm not good with face (in a way) but... The eye seems weird. Might be me but it seem more unaligned on the face. I don't know werewolf's structure appearance, but the neck seem too big. Normally, I think it would be the same size of a human but shorter. And head seems weird as well...

Those are the only concerns I see for that art. I don't know if this will help you in the future but I do hope so. And now for the good news:

You get none. Just kidding. Your shading is excellent. Nice details on the arm and the leg. The shade improves the depth ness (except of those I just mentioned before) of the appearance you made. If this is the best you can do, you got great talents for that. For that, you got my attention so far.

-Knife-
Er... Photoshop? I really can't comment on this since it seems so easy to do. What are your base picture (The picture of the knife) and your add-on (the texture of the stone) picture? I can’t comment this at all so… I’m sorry through.
Bjornen
Posts: 2/3
A nice background, and a paint job wuld help it allot. Im just not good enough with Photoshop atm. So knock youre self loose mate. And thanks
Kyoku kun
Posts: 148/1329
There werewolf is good, thinking of how great it would look with a good background makes me like it more. When I get photoshop I think I will do that.
I like the knife too.
Over all good work, I can't wait to see the newer stuff!
Bjornen
Posts: 1/3
Hey guys, rely like this forum so i thought that i wuld join. Hers on of my drawings. Its pretty old, and by far not the best. Its just the only on i have on my pc atm. My scanner is beeing repaired. This is my deviantART profile's gallery

http://bjornen.deviantart.com/gallery/

Hope 'ye like.
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