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Ryan Ptooie Is back!           Since: 10-01-04 From: Stafford, UK Since last post: 4643 days Last activity: 4603 days |
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| Omigad... That title sounds so cheesy.
Oh well! I decided to finally begin writing the sequel to the short story I did a long time ago now called The Rescue. Link to my FictionPress version of it. EDIT: Oh yeah, forgot to mention this is just chapter 1 (Last edited by Ryan on 01-26-08 07:35 AM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Well, I've read up to chapter 5. It's interesting, though it could use some touching up. More description and whatnot. I spotted a few typos as well, but nothing major. |
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