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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie!          Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| It seems that with the new structuring of the story that the line in the first part about the "after the cloud incident" seems a bit odd. Otherwise oh the joys of odd clouds and weird cats! | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Interesting... so now I'm really wanting to know what's going on and what the voice is. Get home and write more! The voice, it plagues me!! | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Okay, that is rather strange... what is with the voice anyway? Is it in his head? You really need to update these more often. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| here, not hear... a few other typos as well.
Hmn, so now we see how Ryan is connected to that story... how very interesting. I like how the arcs are starting to intertwine more now, you really see how things are coming together. |
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| Unfortunately, this story is being entirely rewritten and will have a new title as well. Basically, I'm cutting this story but retaining the character. I don't want the Ryan character to possess too many of the same qualities as the Server One character. | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Is that where you were going with it? Hmn, I suppose that it is a good idea. So what are you going to do with him now? | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| Ryan's character doesn't really show up at all in the current storylines. The concentration is on Brandon, Christine, Crystle, Lee, T'om, Pat and Server One (Celeste). And moreso on just he Lee/Pat conflict than anything else. And, I think I'm changing the Lee character name to Cross because I don't like using my own name for these things.
Anyway, I know that Ryan will be mentioned in the first parts of a few of the books to establish that he's around, but he won't show up again until near the end when he'll be needed as part of the end-twist. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Ah, I see. So when will we get to see this new version? | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| I think I stopped all work on Paradox Island until I can lay down the big story between Server One, Lee and Pat. | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Aww. Well, it is important to lay out the story before writing it, so I am in total agreement with that. |
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