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Ryan Ptooie Is back!           Since: 10-01-04 From: Stafford, UK Since last post: 4643 days Last activity: 4604 days |
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| A story about one of my Sim Battle characters, which is a mixture of my strongest. I'm not sure if this is the correct forum though.
The battle between the Erumi and the Delumi... All because of an ancient feud between the fact the Erumi had human forms, and the Delumi have psychic powers. For centuries the two species have fought each other. One fateful day changed the lives of these species. The insect-like Delumi went to attack Earth, the birthplace of human scum. The Erumi catch word of this and come to help Earth. After the invasion of Earth, unluckily by the two species, a single Erumi and a single Delumi were captured. Teundusia was the child of DNA mixture experiments. At the age of three months, she had already learnt most of the English language from the scientists, how to read and write, how to walk and even taught herself how to fly in the same way her alien folk would. By two years of age, she was able to lift 5 times her own body weight, and her strength continued to grow as she did. Her mind was ultimately spectacular, and for three years the scientists experimented on her like a plaything, trying out tests on her einstien mind and hercules body. Various changes happened to Teundusia as she grew older that shouldn't happen to an Erumi. She was able to hear the scientists clearly when they weren't even moving their lips. "Excellent vantrillaquizem" was the first though that came to her mind, until she had replied to a scientists after he had thought of a question to ask her. Within moments nearly every scientist in the complex was crowding around her. The thoughts of them forced their way into Teundusia's mind, which frankly pissed her off very much. A large amount of psychic energy escaped from her mind with her anger, killing most of the scientists, knocking the rest out into a coma. A single scientist had only been stunned for a couple of days... She escaped the building with ease, as the guards that would normally surround every doorway out were in the pile of scientists. She made her way to a wood, where she found an abandoned hut. It was very worn out, but it was here home for the next four years, while she practiced her psychic abilities until she could release energy safely and read other people's minds who walked through the woods at her own will. Although one day through training, a short time after she had turned 6 she attempted a psychic ability, when what came out was nothing she had ever produced before in her life. An orb of ligtning flew from her hands, crashing straight into her home. It burnt down so quickly Teundusia didn't even know what had happened. She attempted another one, but this time a beam of ice froze the burnt down hut. Shocked at what she was now capable of, she spent the next three years teaching herslef how to control the use of these abilities. Unfortunately, this single living scientist finally tracked Teundusia down, and with a single tranquilizer dart, she fell like a stone. She woke in a rather large room, to her left was a small shelf containing a sword and a pair of nunchucks. To her right was a series of chips which had very small writing on them, explaining what they did. Infront of her was a series of extremely heavy weights, a line of targets getting smaller as they went along, and something that looked like a recharging plug. She gets up, almost throwing herself off the ground as she does. Looking at her body it is now made of metal, and a read-out infront of her explains she is in a specially crafted test battle suit, made out of copper compressed so much there was no gap between the atoms. The only part of her that was uncovered was her face excluding the eyes, where the readouts were. Looking at her arm, the readout changes to explain what it is. It tells her to take all 6 catridges off the wall and place them in the holding slots provided. Within a few minutes Teundusia realised what was going on, mainly because she had read the mind of the only human nearby. She was back in the laboratory. Only one thing was on her mind now: Escape. The readout infront of her changed to show the suit's battery life, how it's sense drives were functioning, the strength multiplier was at optimum power at 120 times her own weight... This gave her the chance to escape. She played along for a couple of months, following the training routines, practicing her physical, psychic and magical abilities. She was shocked to find she no longer had a need to eat. She now fed on electricity, which was once every few weeks. Whenever she was recharged, she could taste the electricity like chocolate to a young child. It was absolute bliss, and she savoured every second of it. Her escape was too easy. Even though she only had a 6, nearly 7 year old's body, she only needed to perform a single punch at the wall to escape. The punch threw a gargantuan chuck of cement through the complex, causing a huge explosion. Teunduisa was unnharmed. The scientist had a peaceful final breath, knowing his battle suit worked flawlessly. She made her way back to the rubble of her home, where she raised almost a palace with the trees of the forest. Which her powers she moved this and her recharger to an island in the middle of the bermuda triangle. She continues to live there, in her irremovable, indestructable suit, now away from civilisation on her remote island, never to be disturbed... Was it good? Rubbish? All comments welcome. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Short, though it does give a good basic backstory to the character. If you wanted to make it into an actual story you could go into more details, like more of the history of the two alien races and why they warred with each other, a bit more of the experimental process that created her, and a bit of things about her apperance, her point of view growing up or the scientist's point of veiw watching her. |
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