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AlpoRaggins Troubadour Not so much dead.         Since: 12-11-04 From: Someday, Somewhere, Over the Rainbow Since last post: 6614 days Last activity: 6504 days |
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| Read it. I challenge your patience. I challenge you to find Flaws (which will probably be VERY VERY easy). I challenge you to get through the whole thing, and understand where I left off.
In the beginning, all was blue, and there stood Everyone. Everyone was but one, and it shone bright. It took the form of Everyone, because it was the only one and one was all that stood in blue. And Everyone fell from it's blue void and into the same realm. Everywhere came from Nowhere, and thus Somewhere was born. But this place it fell into, it was Somewhere, and it was Everywhere, because it consisted of Nowhere and Somewhere. Thus Everywhere was born. Everyone took a step into Everywhere, and thus Movement was made. Everyone defined its surroundings as Blue, and itself as Gold, and thus Color was defined. Everyone took the shape of Man, and thus the Proper Anatomy was created. In its Proper Anatomical, Golden Self, it strode in a downwards motion, and forward, thus creating Direction. Everyone felt it was only right for there to be an end to any Direction, so downwards more did Everyone go, and it created the Bottom. The Bottom was where Everyone actually stood for the first time, and so Solidity came to Everywhere. Everyone then walked in everywhich direction, and realized that Everywhere went on Forever Onward, and that Limit should be established. Thus, Everyone decided that Everywhere was to be round. But feeling that there could be no possible Here without Forever Onward, Everyone declared that the blue above its Proper Anatomical head was to go Forever Onward, and thus Everyone came upon the conclusion that it lived within a confined void, and gave the name of this confined void Place. Standing firm on the flat surface, Everyone focused and out of its Proper Anatomical head came long locks of what would be called Hair. Thus, Variety was created. Everyone felt that its flat, round world would, too, need this Variety, and so Everyone took the land and caused it to wrinkle. The Bottom of this Place was now uneven and random, so Imperfection was made, where Everyone took on the form of Perfection. And because there was no Bottom without Top, Everyone stood atop the tallest wrinkle, and defined Height, and that this was the top, and that what it stood upon was to be called Land. The blue above was to be called Sky, and soon realized that there were but two Colors of the spectrum. Everyone threw a piece of itself (and in the mean time creating what is known as Broken and Complete) into the Sky and that became the Sun. The Sun gave off Light, and all that the Sun did not touch became Darkness. These places were given special names: Caves, Shadows. Everyone soon realized that the Sun had been thrown Far (creating Distance), and it could feel this part of itself so far away, but Everything that was close to Everyone was Near. This Feeling was called Heat, and everywhere that Everyone was not was Cold. Because the Sun touched nigh Everything (Everything being anything other than Everyone but partially the same as Everywhere), there was No Place and Everywhere that it touched, and because Everywhere is Every Space, this, in a way, included No Place. Everyone declared that Everywhere that was unseen to the Proper Anatomical Eye was No Place, but still existed, and came to be Some Place once seen. Everyone had thought back unto the Creations it had made, and thus Memory was created, as was Thought, as Everyone began to think about Thought, and the paradox that Thinking about Thought had been. This caused Everyone to grow Weary, and thus another feeling had occured - Tiredness. Without Tiredness, there would be no Energeticness, and thus Everyone created Energy. Using the new idea of Energy, Everywhere went back to creating the Physical Place Everywhere and therein came another Realm - Imagination and Thought, as opposed to Physical Action. Using this new Imagination, Everyone Thought of new Ideas and Looked upon its Land. There was Land, and there was Sky, and Land was Solid, Sky was Forever, but there must be an in between. Everyone flooded portions of the Land with a New Substance, one that was not Solid but did not have the unlimitedness of Forever. Thus Liquid was formed, and Everyone swam in the new Area which was created, as there were Two Places - Land, and Sea. Two gave way to the thought of Counting, and Everyone counted the drops of Liquid that made up the Sea, and declared that only it shall know the number, and that if only it existed, than what was not existing? Out of two new Feelings - Curiosity and Loneliness, Everyone created the first Being. It was born on Land, and took the form of Proper Anatomy. Everyone took this new Proper Anatomy and disfigured the legs so that there were Four, and the spine that ran along its back was bent to support this. The first Creature, as Everyone called it, had been the first Comparative Imperfectness. Everyone wanted to have this Creature Aid it in the Process that was Creation, thus Everyone gave the first form of Generosity unto this Creature and blessed it with Intelligence. Everyone needed a way to Order this Creature to Work, so Communication was created. The Creatures first Words were that Everyone was not to be Everyone anymore, and that it is to be properly called One, and the both of them called Everyone. Thus there was Creature and One, both of them were Everyone. To prove the fact that Every Creature was Everyone, the Creature created a Being of its own, and placed it within the Sea. This reinforced the fact that Every Being was Everyone, One was the Creator, and that Everyone needed a Name. The First Creature was dubbed by One as Pony. The Second Creature was dubbed Whale, and that also that its Area (the Sea) was to be its Home, or place where it will reside. This gave birth to Archaic Nature. Some Creatures lived in one Area, and some lived in another. In humor to Variety, the Pony moved among the Land, breathing Life into other creatures that would not move from their Area, reinforcing Archaic Nature, and thus Plants were created. These were seperate from the Moving Creatures, and so the Moving Creatures came to be known as Animals. THAT IS ALL I COULD WRITE FOR NOW. Thank you very much, bitches and hoes, for your attention to my attempt at making my own world. It has been successful for me, and I am proud. (Last edited by J. Literal on 11-03-05 11:41 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| Wow, I actually was able to follow along with that... and it was awesome! I am deeply impressed that you managed to do that without losing track of anything. Great job! | |||
caxama Archer  Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6662 days Last activity: 6275 days |
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| WOW! That was beautiful, I could follow it, and once I started to read it I had to finish it. It was beauty in chaos, but chaos became order. Thus you have capture an eccence of life. I'm very impressed. | |||
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AlpoRaggins Troubadour Not so much dead. Since: 12-11-04 From: Someday, Somewhere, Over the Rainbow Since last post: 6614 days Last activity: 6504 days |
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| I have continued it. I had too, there was so much more to do! I had to do some editing, so if you see the word "It", with the "I" captalized, that is reffering to One (who was formerly Everyone). I dunno if I completed the editing... but oh well, here it is:
The first plants were Colorless, and spread wherever Pony moved. Pony was the originator of Beauty, as it gave Life to Plants, and the Plants gave back to Pony, as they allowed him to eat them. Pony created trees, and forests, and all the Land which had once been Gray had turned to Green. The Plants, though Colored and Beautiful, cried to One how they required their own Sustenance, as they fed Pony, they should live off of a force also. Their ungrateful cries of Hunger infuriated One, and It had taken its Proper Anatomical fist to the core of the Land, causing a grand Split in the Land. The Sea seeped slowly into this Split, and it came to be the River. The River gave Sustenance to the Plants, and quenched Pony's thirst. Pony could not reach the other side of the River though, as it was far too wide for Pony to bound across, and thus there came a Great Wasteland, that consisted only of grey, Lifeless stone. One's Land had become split in half - one made of all things Living, but there is no definition to Life without Death so it was placed into One's Anatomically Proper hands to Kill Pony and give a Title to the other side of the Land. One hurled Pony over the River, and upon landing his hooves crumbled beneath him, but he had not gone away. Pony had been in Pain, and began to cry, and below him formed a Lake and a small surrounding area of Life - the very life that seeped from him. To end this Misery, One created another creature to finish him. Thus the Lion was formed, the symbol of Death on Land, and Lion had feasted upon Pony's carcass, and that because Pony had given so much back to the Land and to the Lion, he was granted Death, Eternal Sleep. The Soul (the force which powered the creature) within Pony had been Grateful to One, and so One placed this Everlasting Soul within his Anatomically Proper Heart, and thus Afterlife was created, and the Reasoning behind Life and Death was solved. Life was to Create and Take from and for the Land - Death was dealt when the job was done and a creature could take no more. With this new Idea, One came down to the Land and crafted Man with Its power. Man took on the form of Anatomical Perfection, looking like One. One could not have two of Itself, and thus he dulled Man's appearance into an imperfect, pink, soft Flesh. Man ran naked through the Land, and lived freely. One gave Emotion to Man, and thus Curiosity was sparked within Man. Man searched for others of his Kin, and when he could find no one, One formed Woman to accompany man. Because the Process of Creating Man had been Taxing, even on One's Limitless Self, he gave unto Man and Woman the power to Reproduce, and thus Man and Woman created Child. Child had both the Curiosity and Naiivety of both Man and Woman, and thus Child began to explore the Land, unsupervised. Child had found the River and across the shore stood Lion. The First Child took a step into the River and swam across to greet the Lion, unknowing to the fact that greeting the Lion meant Death. With one fell swoop of his massive claw, Lion murdered Child in time for Man and Woman to witness this. Both cried in Horror, as the First Child had become the first of Mankind to Die. Feeling Guilt for having to show Man what Curiosity can create, One took Child into his Eternal Heart and bore The Second Man and The Second Woman as a sign of Forgiveness. The First Coupling produced another child, and this time Child was a Female (that of Woman) and the Second Coupling created a Male (that of Man). The First and Second Families were created, and the Children Aged, as it allowed them to Reproduce. Because the Children aged into Adults, the Adults, too, were forced to age, and when their Bodies had grown too Weak to give back to the Land, One had gently taken their Souls into his Heart, and the Grandchildren of the original Girl and the Second Boy continued on the Legacy of their family. The cycle came to be known as Living, and so Peace was bountiful on the Living side of the River. Men flourished within the Land, and soon One became old Itself. The Being that was One knew not the limitations of Man and Life, so it was that One was to Slumber in the Sky, keeping an Eye on Man. One created a Throne on which to sit, and this became the Moon. He placed the Moon very close to the land in order to easily view Mans Growth and Production. With Its Luminescence, One lit up the Moon, and thus it glowed a pale, perfect Orb, an object to which Man could Worship and view their Creator. Man below formed Colonies with their large Families, and had declared pieces of Land their own. They begun to wear Clothes formed from the backs of Animals which One had produced as to aid Man's Growth. These animals were the Sheep and the Cow. Thus Domesticated Animals lived. To create Undomestication, One created Birds and numerous Untamed Beasts, all of whom were akin, but not as powerful, as the Lion (who still lived in his Dead Land). Man hunted these Animals for Sustenance, and One allowed this as repentance for the Death of the First Son - because Animal had Slaughtered Man first, Man had the Right to Kill and Devour its Enemy forever Onward. Animals were stripped of Intelligence to the point of knowing near nothing and living only to serve Man. But Animal had a chance, and, too, could attack Man, thus creating a Equality and Justice between the two Creatures. There might be more to come. I might end it there though. Who knows what'll come... maybe the growth of Man's Civilization. I'm sure I'll think of something else to add onto it. (Last edited by J. Literal on 11-05-05 04:38 PM) |
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