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caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

Since last post: 6659 days
Last activity: 6272 days
Posted on 01-25-06 03:13 PM Link | Quote
Words are something simple,
Most say them everyday,
We can say them standing,
or even as we lay.

Some words are hurtful,
They can make you sad,
The worst can make you angry,
And others make you so mad.

People use words to hurt you,
Just to see you cry,
But don't worry,
Someone special will come by.

They will show you kindness,
Make you forget the pain,
They will make you laugh,
Whether by jokes or a silly game.

Don't you fret,
This person is here to stay,
When someone cruel hurts you,
They'll be back to stay.
Elara

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Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 99 days
Last activity: 99 days
Posted on 01-31-06 12:08 AM Link | Quote
It seems odd that you use "stay" twice in the same stanza, otherwise nice rhyme scheme and good flow.
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