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| Xeogaming Forums - - Posts by Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica.          Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| You can view the RP here I based it on here: http://younglds.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=1578
For those of you that don't want to read badly written posts, my book is basically about a man who killed a dragon being mutated so that he loses almost all of his memory, but has most of the benefits a dragon would have, such as really strong skin, being able to breath fire, and a lot strong than a normal human being. After killing the ragon, he loses consciousness and stays asleep in a cave for ten years. When h awakes, he discovers that some guy is trying to kill him going to almost any length to do so. Also, demons are supposed to be found in many places, killing people. Anyone who wants to read the first part of it can look here, http://board.xeogaming.net/thread.php?id=9019 Anyway, most of the characters and the mythology are based on norse mythology, with enough alterations to make it unique. In other words, I've made it so that elves and dwarves are both human, but they're different races of human. I've also done a ton of research in order ot geth this book done(common formations in medival warfare, how to use weapons, heck, even how they cooked.  ) So basically, I managed to make this book as realistic as possible, with the exception of magic.(Last edited by Vulkar on 01-03-08 04:41 PM) |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| Real life Bruce Lee could beat fictional River Tam.
Realistically though, River Tam should have been replaced iwth Chuck Norriss of Jackie Chan. |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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Originally posted by Nagis Only if it becomes an E-book.
Fun fact for everyone, my book was originally started with three writers, one of whom was Ryan. Ryan gave out first, after writing about ten pages and then growing bored. The other person(Aubrey) I haven't talk to in ages, but last time I did, insisted that she stilled wanted to be writing. That was several months ago, and I doubt she's done anything.
Also, yeah, I do hope to make money on this thing. I imagine that writing it alone is good for some nice bonus points when I apply for college. |
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I wrote this story not too long ago, and while it's fairly short, I really like it. This story was mostly written as experimentation to see how well I can write while concentrating on just one character, preferably in the first person. Because this was mostly and experience, constructive critisizm is very welcome.
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________________________________ I stand in the middle of a crowd, two guards holding my chained arms. I am nothing to this crowd, just another man ready to die for their barbaric entertainment, just a man destined to die for his sins. I do not hate them. I know as well as they that I deserve death. In my lifetime, I have done nothing to benefit humanity, nothing to redeem myself from my terrible sins, nothing to save my soul from the eternal fires of Hell. I only wish that I could relive my life, that I had not harmed those hundreds of people, that I had not murdered, plundered, and created chaos for hundreds of men, women, and children. ________________________________ Less than a year ago I was a pirate on the sea. I was never a captain, nor did I ever wish to be. Instead, I was the ship quartermaster. I controlled the gold, the food, and the equipment. I was trusted with everything the ship contained, and if the captain ever went against my wishes, I could withhold food and water from the men. The captain tried to replace me once, with disastrous results. I was the only man on the ship who was educated in even the most basic arithmetic, meaning that I was the only one able to handle dividing the food and water, the only one able to give each man his wages according to his work, and the only man able to sell what we had for a decent price. Under the uneducated man that my captain had placed as quartermaster, the ship ran out of food within weeks. We were hungry, and we were forced to make for shore early, buying food from an English town. After this unfortunate event, I was placed once again as the quartermaster of my pirate ship. I continue to walk through the crowd, staring at the dirt ground. I have never before appreciated the ground. It holds millions of men and women on this world never giving up in its attempts to hold our clumsy bodies. The ground will do nothing when I hang in the air, a noose around my neck, dying for my crimes. ________________________________ Only once in my life have I ever assisted someone other than myself. A month ago, my ship attacked another, capturing a young girl of ten. My captain, still angry at me for keeping my position as quartermaster, had assigned me to take care of this girl until they decided what to do with her. Having a woman on a ship was often thought to cause bad luck by pirates. So, after the winds began blowing us away from the shore and we were attacked by a Spanish skiff, the captain resolved to throw the girl off the ship. In a sudden burst of charity that surprised even myself, I pleaded with the captain to spare her life. I had grown quite attached to the girl, and was determined to have him spare her life. The captain refused, and told me that she would be thrown overboard in the morning. No land was within miles of us, and there was no chance that such a small girl could stay afloat long enough for a ship to come and save her. ________________________________ I have left the dirt, and am now walking on wooden planks, towards the rope that will execute me. I will die within moments, life being taken from me. It is only what?s right. I will die, but it will be just. It is what I deserve for my sins. ________________________________ That night, desiring to spare her life, I stole a raft, and boated away with her. I knew then that there was no way I could survive if I succeeded in keeping her alive. Pirates were hung by all nations, and unfortunately, this girl had to be left with men who would inevitably hang me. The water was cold, and we were only able to eat a little each day, for the raft could hold very little food. Fortunately for the girl, an English galleon intercepted us, and brought us aboard. Unfortunately for me, they discovered within moments of our meeting that I was a pirate. They chained me, and brought me to the Virgin Islands, where I was rightfully sentenced to be hung for my crimes. ________________________________ The executioner puts the rope around my neck, and grabs a lever, intending to release the floor below me, sending me falling to me death. ?Wait!? I look up, not out of hope, but out of mild curiosity. It would only delay my death. ?This man returned with the governor?s daughter, correct?? The executioner nods, but I doubt he knows. This man must execute several men every week, would he truly care enough to find out who I actually was? "The governor has offered him a full pardon from his crimes if he agrees to work for the Royal navy.? The executioner pulls out a knife, and cuts the rope from my neck. ?Do you agree to work for the Navy?? my savior asks. I nod. I have committed many crimes, but at last, it seems I may have a chance for redemption. EDIT: Layout deleted. (Last edited by Vulkar on 01-07-08 06:50 PM)
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Have you ever looked skinny? |
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Yeah, not a TV series, just a miniseries. |
A bit more information: http://www.rhifilms.com/property.php?propertyId=CofMagic I'm actually really looking forward to it. Those two weren't his best books, but I enjoyed their story. Also, after how great Hogfather was(which has the same director), I think that this could very well be awesome. And I honestly can't think of a better Death than Christopher Lee, although Hogfather's Death was pretty good.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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What I almost always do is sudden get up really early in the morning(around seven) and try to stay awake until at least 10PM. It'll make you tired for that whole day, but at least you'll be back into your ideal sleeping schedual. |
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I was actually hesitant to add much more dialog. I think that it would take away from the feeling of this basically being a man's thoughts before he dies. If I put in dialog, other people's thoughts would be added as well.
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I'm not sure what I'm saying with this, but I'm fairly sure that dialog would ruin the general feeling I'm trying to create. I will try to add in a bit more description later though. With luck, I can use this character in some of my later stories, though probably not in a novel. Oh yeah, as an extra bonus, my original ending was just going to have him die, but like most of the stories I've written, I changed the end at the last second. Anyway, more reviews, praises, or problems with the book. I like information!
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I wouldn't choose Obama or Clinton, Obama is a good speaker, but I think he's way too inexperienced, but Clinton has done little more in her campaign than try and put herself above others. I don't really like either.
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I'm honestly tied between Romney and Huckabee, though I'm not crazy about either. Romney seems more like he'll do what people want, but hasn't been steady on most of the issues he supports. Huckabee has been prettyy good, but he has also said a few things to show he's not hugely knowledgable. Overall, I'm not loving any of the candidates.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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If it was a public school, it's probably hackable, but I still wouldn't reccomend it. Trying to get through someone's security is just asking for trouble.
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If it's a college, you'll need a bit of luck, and be more likely to get caught.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Well, at least now you don't have to choose?
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Sorry, that was fairly mean, but two years are seriously not that much. I might actually reccomend to yuor friends that you were wrong, even if she isn't interested in you.
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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You know, if it weren't for the fact that TVLink's absense hasn't affect me in the least, I'd be celebrating.
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TVLinks taught me how to get TV shows by myself, and NOT through torrents.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I'm actually suprised at how people have voted in these polls so far. I used to think that I was the only republican on this board, but here we have more republican votes than democrat. |
But yeah, I'd personally have a fairly huge problem with Clinton. Just watching the video of when she "cried" shows how fake she is. Try and find tears, if you succeed, I'll give you a metaphorical medal. Also, I'd reccomend you all do a bit of research on how Obama has gotten to his current political position. Supposedly then he's found things out about some of his opposition, and then made it public, pretty much ruining their lives. I'm not sure about the details, but I'm not sure I'd like an inexperienced person rumored to have trained under our enemies in war, and who plays dirty politics as my president. Now, I know that it isn't certain that he trained as a terrorist, but the rumors alone, especially since we're have many problems with Al Qaeda, make me not even consider him as a potential president. I honestly think that someone involved in any sort of peaceful union with our enemies, is unfit to the our commander-in-chief. So this is basically why I don't like any of the big democrats right now.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Big bump, but since when did I care?
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I just saw this movie, and I thought it was pretty awesome. There were a lot of cool action sequences, and the plot wasn't that bad. Also, while you won't find it intellectually stimulating, it wasn't as stupid as I thought. I reccomend this to anyone who's just trying to watch something for fun.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Meh, I've never really been a fan of MSN anyway.
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I've always prefered Gmail.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I'm joining this, but I need to talk to you about my idea for a character. It's not usual, so I'd rather talk to you on AIM first.
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Don't worry, it's not like a supermercenarywithalltheskillscombined character.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Jack sat in the courtroom, a thin smile on his face. He'd never had a huge problem with governments combining into a world government, but he was irritated when they forced the E'shyum to participate. His people voted towards joining, and while he strongly disagreed, he allowed the E'shyum to do as they wished.
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It was even worse when this new government remembered his part in the Josiah catastrophe five years ago. Because of his unwilling help, the people demanded for him to be jailed. Which put him here, in a courtroom, his lawyers talking to a jury, demanding his innocence. He didn't pay attention to the lawyers babbling. Most of the facts they used were lies, their witnesses false. Jack regretted his deception, for only he and Brad truely knew what happened, and Brad hadn't shown his face in ages. Which was why this whole trial was pointless. The prosecuters had no evidence, no witnesses, and nothing more than speculation from people who saw Jack with Josiah in the very end. It was shocking how little of the specualation mentioned that he actually tried to stop Josiah, just as much as anyone else. Oh yeah, and they didn't even seem to remember how much Brad did to fight Josiah, and how while Josiah did succeed in destroying the shards eventually, Brad, the E'shyum general, was the one who stopped him twice. To think that they called this a trial... ooc: I'll tell about Brad in a later post.
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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I admit that his death is sad, and I think that anyone dying is bad, regardless of who it is, but I have one comment like Ryans...
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Why is it that you can really hate a person when he's alive, and as soon as he's dead, you have all this respect and sadness for his or her loss? It's not just Heath Ledger(in fact, probably not him much as all, sicne he was a good actor), but a lot of different celebrities. As a better example, look at Anne Nicole Smith. Everyone hated her, and then the news showed her as a hero, soon after she died. It makes no sense to me...
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Max bounded forward intot he arena, but he doubted his opponenet noticed. Not many people notice a rabbit jumping into a field.
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But he was no ordinary rabbit, he prefered to call himself a rabbit thingy. A psychotic hyperkenetic rabbit thingy! What's more, he was a white rabbit, all big and fluffy. The fluff annoyed him, and caused little children to charge at him yelling "BUNNNY!!! IT'S a BUNNY WABBIT!" He was here to kill some guy who thought he was really special. This guy was going to die! He probably thought of Max as a Bunny Wabbit, and so he would die! He looked at his opponent, his teeth ready to devour, and finally spoke. "Hi, I'm Max! This is your first and final warning, surrender, or die evil felon!" | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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