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Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
 Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica.          Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I think yes, if only because I'm not sure how good of a story I can come up with right now, waiting a little while would definitely be a good idea. |
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I didn't really watch many of his movies(only The Ten Commandments and Planet of the apes), but it's sad that he died.
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May he rest in peace.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I'm writing this literally secondsafter finishin it, so I'm still cracking up at the ending. It's awesome. |
Anyway, other than that, I thought that this was reall well done, the tone of your writing is perfect for what you're trying to do, and you give plenty of detail. My only possible complaint is that you pass over parts of it too quickly, but since this si just a short story, and not a novel, that's excused. I look forward to seeing how this develops. Is Sylar really Voldemort? (Last edited by Rakluv on 04-10-08 02:12 PM)
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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To be perfectly honest...
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I haven't even gotten the chance to start mine.
It'll get done on time though, I hope.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Actually I've got most of it done now, I felt inspired to write, and I wrote.
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It's not perfect, but seeing as how I usually don't like the writing styles needed for short stories, you all might like it a lot more. It's DEFINITELY better than what I did last year though.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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It's only reached the 80s around here. |
Anyway, I can get sunburned pretty badly, and I've never tanned, but luckily, a bit of sunblock pretty much always does the trick, and I'm get no worries. Also, Rogue, have you tried spray-on sunscreen? If you get a fairly expensive type, it usually doesn't have much of the greasy-skin(mine has none) and has the side bonus of being easier to apply, and thus, less likely to allow sunburn.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I demand another chapter.
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DEMAND IT! And Sylar could totally kill Harry Potter...and then become a wizard mutant supervillian!
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Now, we all know this is going to be awesome.
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Also, supposedly then it's going to try and be rated T, which is unusual for a Mortal Kmobat game, but they're going to try and stretch the T rating as much as they can. Yeah, a lot of people will be mad that there's not as much violence, but considering that it was all the excessive blood and gore that made me not play Mortal Kombat before, I'm happy.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Even if he knows about .org, I think he'll leave us alone. I went and asked him respectfully to stop hacking the board(rather than getting mad and pissing him off), and he said he'd leave us alone now.
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He even told us what to do to patch the security hole he came through, so we're fine. And get Darkslaya working on that list of e-mails I suggested! Word of mouth is WAY too slow of a way to spread the word, and not too likely to completely retore activity.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I used to think I knew what the most embarrasing injury would be...
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Clearly, I was wrong.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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You could integrate Comet Saga into the rest of the RP forum, Cairoi hasn't touched it in ages.
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Other than that, most of my ideas are jokes that no one else would really agree with.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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I disapprove of abortion anyway, unless in cases where the mother will die, or maybe rape.
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So honestly, I think that I approve, showing them the ultrasound is a good idea, if they still think that having a child would be bad at that point, I don't really think they should go ahead, but whatever. The parents could just give the child to an adoption agency or something, I know of plenty of people who have done that, no reason to punish a child who hasn't even developed its eyes for your mistake.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Happy birthday man, as usual...
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One year closer to death! Except you're only a little older than me... I'm doomed...I think.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Bet he get's elected. |
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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No, this isn't king of the world material...
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This is the freaking master of the universe! Those videos were awesome, especially the news one.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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Like I've said Xeo, get your e-mail list!
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But then, I've said it so many times it feels like a lost cause now...
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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All of the responses were fairly interesting, although I wondered what was going through Charles Mason's head when he wrote his...I was barely able to make sense of it.
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 106 days Last activity: 106 days
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WORD COUNT: 1,540. I'm hoping those 40 words won't disqualify me, but I really couldn't get rid of them without losing the feeling of the whole story.
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Also, I know that this has nothing to do with the actual story, but what I wrote is actually only the first half of a full complete story. Originally, this was all the story was going to be, but by no I've added in another 1,500 words. I'll post the full thing once this competition is over. Anyway, enjoy. _________________________________________ I slammed the door to my small house, fuming as I left. How could things have gotten so bad, how could everything have become so terrible! I was an only son to a single father, and I didn’t wonder that my mother had left that sick man who called himself my father. The only thing I blame her for was leaving me with him. To the outside world, my father was a preacher for a Southern Babtist church, a good, if stern shepherd, who loved his flock of Christians, and would make sure they were saved, whether they wanted to be, or not. No one would have ever guessed what he did when his metaphorical sheep weren’t watching. Even now, just thinking of what he did still causes the scars on my back to hurt, still causes my mind anguish as I think of what he did. I kept walking down the road, trying not to think of the scratches on my back, of the bruises that now dominated my body. I ignored the pain in my chest…if I showed any signs that I had been beaten, I honestly believed that my father would murder me. I feared that I wouldn’t live to adulthood… I was lucky this time, when my father had arrive home, and discovered that I had finished my studies, and not continued towards my reading of the Bible, he got angry… I was lucky to have only received two new bruises…one of his peers rang the doorbell, and my father insisted that he would finish disciplining me later, and for me to go to the church and pray for forgiveness. I didn’t walk towards the church, I didn’t want forgiveness, if there was truly a perfect God, why would he have put me in such horrible circumstances? Why would he have allowed me to be abused so terribly? I could not believe that there was a perfect being…no perfect being would cause me so much grief. Instead, I walked until I was out of view of my house, and sat, tears flowing down my cheeks. Why did my father have to do this! Why did he have to beat me, why did he have to beat his own son! It wasn't always like this, four years ago, when I was ten, things were different. I had two loving parents, two parents who would pick me up from school, rather than have me walk the five miles to my house, two parents who would love me, who would actually be glad to spend time around me. Why did it all have to change! It all started three years ago, I still don't know why, but when I woke up one morning, my father told me my mother had left us, had abandoned her home, her son. Ever since then, my father slowly grew worse, he only used to yell at me at first, but then he began growing more angry, going to far as to hit me. It only grew worse from there, he started using his belt, and then a real whip. HOW COULD HE DO THIS?! I watched the street, and saw a man leave our house, looking satisfied with himself. I knew this man, he was a lawyer, and not one whom my father particularly liked. He hated lawyers, but at least he treated them better than me...he treated the men who lied for money better than his own son! I walked slowly back towards my house, I knew that if I ran away, it would only make the beatings worse...it would only cause me more pain. I passed by the lawyer, and he gave me a sad look, patting me on the shoulder as he passed. I glared at him, his patting my shoulder was a fake attempt at friendliness, I knew that it meant nothing. I walked further towards my door, a tear sliding down my cheek. It wasn't shed because of fear, though I still held plenty of that inside me. No, the tear was shed for sorrow, shed for my father's betrayal and hatred, for the love that he once had having disappeared. I opened the door, and stepped inside the house. ‘Get in here!’ my father shouted. I felt myself shake as I walked slowly towards him. My father turned, and I looked at his angry face. The lawyer had put him into a worse mood...I wouldn't be let off easy today. ‘You're crying,’ my father observed coldly. ‘is the guilt truly that strong in you?’ I nodded, hoping it would at least lessen the beating I would inevitably receive. I looked at the wall, and my eyes widened in shock, he had his rifle leaning against it. ‘Come here,’ he demanded loudly. I winced at his words, but my feet mover forward obediently, almost as if by their own will. He grabbed me roughly when I was in his reach, ‘What were you doing?!’ he demanded of me. ‘What did you tell the lawyer!’ ‘Nothing!’ I cried, ‘I didn't say anything to him.’ ‘You're lying, I saw him pat you on the back, and I saw the look he gave you, as if he didn't think you were nearly as fortunate as you are!’ I felt anger rise within me, and I did something that I knew I would regret, ‘FORTUNATE?!’ I shouted. ‘ALL YOU'VE DONE IS BEAT ME!’ My father's eyes narrowed, and he lifted a fist, then punched me in the chest. He always hit the chest, it was the only place he could hit without his people knowing what was happening. ‘How dare you speak to me in that way!’ He punch me again, and this time sent me flying against the wall. My father grabbed something from under his desk...it was the whip! He pulled out the ten foot long tool of punishment, and lashed it towards me, striking me across the leg. I looked at it, it was bleeding. ‘Argh! Please, stop!’ I felt the lash of his whip again, striking against my arm, and again, as it slammed into my ribs. Suddenly I felt a surge of anger flow through me, as I realized this man couldn’t be my father, this man was nothing more than my enemy, he didn’t mean anything to me. ‘STOP!’ I shouted. I pushed myself to my feet, almost falling back against the force of his next strike. ‘Get back, boy!’ my father shouted, putting away his whip as I came closer. ‘This is only going to make your beatings worse!’ Not caring, I ran forward, limping, and punched my father right in the face. I could see the sudden rage grow inside him, as he realized that I had defied him. ‘YOU’RE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT ONE, BOY!’ I saw him pull back his fist, and felt as he slammed it right between my eyes. I suddenly cried out as pain suddenly covered my face. I could feel blood flowing from my nose-it must have been broken. My father lifted both his arms, and slammed me against the wall, screaming in anger. Suddenly I felt a pressure around my throat, and my breathing started becoming more difficult… This man was trying to strangle me! I grabbed his arms that were around my throat, and tried to pull, with no success. Suddenly my eyes caught sight of something leaning against the wall, my father’s gun. I tried to pull against his hands more-I couldn’t shoot him! I kept trying, tears pouring ou of my eyes, as my sight slowly darkened. Finally, realizing that it was inevitable, I used the last of my strength to reach for the shortened rifle, and point it at him. My father’s eyes widened in shock as he realized what I was doing, and too late he released pressure with one of his hands, reaching for the gun. He did too little too late. I still remember the feeling, the anger that flowed threw me, the betrayal, the guilt, the physical anguish. I remember it like it was just yesterday. But more than that, I remember the chilling ease of pulling the gun’s trigger. Murder shouldn’t be this easy, it shouldn’t take so little effort to take a man’s life, no matter how terrible he is. The images of his death are scarred into my mind, the way his head flew back when the bullet his him, the blood that sprayed from his wound, and the fear that dwindled in his eyes, even after the light of life left his face. The first thing I felt after killing this man was not relief. I did not feel as though I had finally saved myself from his terror, I did not feel as though what I did was right… But I didn’t feel that it was wrong either. I didn’t feel that I had done something evil, that I had torn the life out of this wretched man’s body. I didn’t feel sadness or guilt, and that was perhaps what scared me most of all. I had become a murderer, and I didn’t care. I could kill a man, and not care. That was worse than anything I could have felt anywhere. But at least I was free. (Last edited by Rakluv on 04-30-08 06:14 PM) | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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