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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica.          Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| Yeah, a blood sugar that low cannot be good. Was that the A1C test, or one of the tests designed just to show your current level? | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| You don't actually have to get a full checkup to get an A1C test. If you go up to the pharmacist at Walmart, or Walgreens, they should be able to get you that test pretty cheaply. They should help you interpret the results too. Worst case scenario, you can get an A1C test kit, probably in that same section of the store.
And yeah, be careful about eating too much if you think you have diabetes as well. Docotr's say that your blood sugar should never go over 200, but a lot of results say that damage to the body happens around 140, so be careful about that. |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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Originally posted by Ryan Pretty much every example you have of their faults is actually not in the quaran, but in Sharia Law. Now, the interesting thing about Sharia law is that it isn't exactly specifically defined to all Muslims. Unlike in the Bible, everything is not spelled out. As a result, a lot of Islamic groups interpret it differently. So, for example, the muslim extremists who promote terrorism may believe many of the thins you reference, while more peace loving groups could hold different values or beliefs. What that basically means is, you're right about some, but only about the extremists, who I think we can all agree could use some work. As for building the mosque near ground zero...I will agree that we have no legal way to stop it from being built. Constitutionally, we cannot deny them. But I still say its in very bad taste for them to want to build it so nearby, and it will, withou a doubt, backfire very strongly on the muslim community. I'm sure that they don't view it the same was we do, they probably don't mean to insult or offend...but I still think the should move it a bit farther away. |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| Yeah, Peter Molyneux (Not Polyneux, xD) definitely has a tendency to promise more than he delivers, but I thought he was pretty honest about Fable II, with each of the features he described really being there, really being offered.
And for those wondering, yes, I'm getting this game. No question. It might not be as great and awesome as promised, but it'll still be good fun if it continues to make farting a minigame. |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| Rogue on Xeogaming, xD.
Just kidding, I get it frm a lot of different places, CNN mostly, but a bit from some other places. What's my super power? |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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| You have no idea how excited I was to hear the Advent Rising music in your list, Lord Alexander, xD. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days |
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False, my family works too hard for us to leave lights around too long. 
The person below me is a democrat. (Last edited by Stinky Underpants on 08-23-10 01:55 PM) |
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Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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False, I generally avoid such horrors at all costs.
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The person below me is STILL Rogue.
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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So you think its okay to criticize Stitch? Cause if so you have no place in this conversation and can back off right now. I may not agree with every post he makes, but what he's trying to do is be boring. How can yo be against that? |
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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So you think its okay to hate cannibals? Cause if so you have no place in this conversation and can back off right now. I may not agree with all their recipes, but all they're really trying to do is make a good meal, how can you be against that? |
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Last posts all the way. |
Marking them as old is sometimes useful, but usually I'm too lazy, so I just check last posts.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Didn't you just start at Activision?
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I think you've been through more jobs than anyone else on this message board in the time I've been here, xD.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Vote for Vulkar. The person below me has a strange love of doorknobs.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Grammar: 8
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Obviously you were impacted by having to condense your story, but I thought that your first several paragraphs were a little dry, explaining the relationship as needed, but not quite pulling us in as much as I would have liked. There were a couple of other things like this, but since it was condensed, I suppose its understandable. Spelling: 10 Someday I'll understand why this is ever included. Plot: 7 I thought that the plot was good, but the main complaint I had was where the heart of the story was, or rather, where it wasn't. Was the heart in him getting over his mother's death, in what happenned to Jacob? When the story is over, what part of the plot should be really having an effect on us? Again though, still pretty good. Characters: 8 I thought that this story was a bit light on character, but the plot really didn't require it, so inserting personality probably would have just damaged the story. The only reason I didn't give a ten was because I wasn't sure which character or whose emotions we were supposed to be following. Throughout most of the story, you have us following Benjamin, but then you also tell us the thoughts of Sharron. Description: 9 Great descriptions, using slight metaphors to describe the environment or the way people spoke. Creativity: 10 Nice folktale idea for your story, touching on some original ideas, such as what happenned to the people who had to do the reaping. Overall: 52 A good story, and I enjoyed reading it. I know I didn't score you as high as Elara did, but that's not because I didn't enjoy the story, I just believe in handing out 10s only when something is truly perfect, rather than very good. So good story, I enjoyed it!
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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True, although I've only heard a couple songs.
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The person below me suddenly is in conscious control of their breathing, and is going to have to write their post slower because now they have to concentrate on breathing.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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False, I have a bit of orange flavoring.
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The person below me agrees that the person about me was slightly dishonest, xD.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Grammar: 7
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A few tense changes, earlier on, plus the grammatical problems Xeios mentioned. Pretty good, but it could use some more proofreading. Spelling: 10 See Xeios. Plot: 6 Xeios mentioned a few things, but I'm going to have to continue what he said further. You talk about how a shockwave of death came from all electronic equipment, including cellphones, iPods, etc? Coupled with all the nuclear power plants melting down? Given how far nuclear technology has come in the last fifty years, I find it hard to believe that all of them would melt down fifty years from now just by accident. I know its supposed to be from the point of view of a crazy man, but I still could have used a bit more explanation. Besides that, and this is a common problem among a a lot of stories, is that the heart of your story isn't clear. Obvious you hint at the story focusing on the main character's craziness, but you never bring up that he likes to feel special until the last line. I'd say foreshadw that part of his personality before you kill off the girl, and you'll be doing a lot better. Characters: 8 Good character and use of voice, although I have to wonder how he knows about Youtube videos that happened seventy years ago...How many movies have you seen and can quote at length from seventy years ago? The only ones anybody really remembers from back then are The Wizard of Oz, and Gone With the Wind, and honestly, that Harry Potter song is no Wizard of Oz. Description: 8 Good descriptions, you obviously need to tighten things up to make it more clear, but I thought it was pretty decent. Creativity: 7 You obviously are on the brink of something that could have been very creative, but sadly, you never quite hit it. Overall: 46 A good story, that I think would obviously have been better if you had more time, but as it is, its good, but in need of more work.
Lord Vulkas Mormonus |
Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Grammar: 8
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Generally pretty good. There were a few errors, but most of those I found justified in the context of the character's voice. Spelling: 10 Blah. Plot: 6 You keep your story focused and to the point, but I think I would have liked to see you take it a little slower, showing more of both him and his victim, maybe a conversation in the office before he leaves for work? The other question is...how did he eat an entire human except for the bones, hair, and nails? Assuming the victim was anorexic, that's still well over 50 pounds of food in two hours. Characters: 6 You character seems like you wanted him to be written like a psychopath. Trouble with emotions, no problem killing/eating people, etc. However, you onl seem to pick and choose which qualities of a psychopath you want him to have. He kills plenty, but somehow he still enjoys reading and eating? And then sex, which activates the pleasure parts of your brain does nothing for him? Besides that, you vaguely mention that he hasn't been living among normal people his whole life, but then go nowhere with it. I really would have liked to see at least a little more about where he came from, or what happenned to him. Also, I think I would have liked to see him actually interact with someone in conversation. We hear of what he likes to do, but the only time we have have him pause and do something was when I killed the intern. I think it would have been a good disturbing piece if he had a friendly conversation with his victim right before leaving work and killing him. Description: 8 You describe stuff, I didn't really find you lacking. Not a lot to say about this.
Creativity: 6 It could have been a lot more creative, but in the end, I'm afraid yo fell into the psychopath territory I've seen covered many times before, whether by Dexter, Bateman, or many of Dean Koontz's novels. Overall: 44 Good, but I really would suggest expanding parts, explaining more, and thinking about your character. You've go well over 800 words left, so I think you really had room to improve. (Last edited by Stinky Underpants on 08-26-10 09:47 AM)
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Vile High Xeodent of Xeomerica. Since: 10-29-04 From: North Carolina, United States. World, Sol System, milky way Since last post: 93 days Last activity: 93 days
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Can I be lucky? xD. |
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