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Makura        Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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FX Zombie Marco Since: 03-24-06 Since last post: 3832 days Last activity: 3727 days |
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| Wow, that was incredible. Almost nothing happened, yet you've got me incredibly enthralled. I can't wait for the next chapter. | |||
Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| Excellent visuals as usual, Makura. I have to admit that the end was really not something that I was expecting, but was very enthralling. How do you connect the first paragraph to the second though? | |||
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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard. Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4850 days Last activity: 4474 days |
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| I love your work as always, Makura. I wasn't orginally going to read this, but you happened to work in the subject of the soul in the beginning, something I've been thinking very, very deeply about lately, and that grabber forced me to read it.
I'm happy I got to read it.  You outclass me beyond comprehension, and I hope one day you can make success out of your skill. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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| Thanks for the comments. Cairoi, you're writing is growing at a rate that is very pleasing and you shuld be proud. Elara, this is going to be a novel and you'll see it unravel more as I write more. I'm gald you guys like it, I'll try to post some more of it by next week. | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| Hmn, I look forward to your next update then. At first I thought that this was just a one shot, so I am pleased to hear that there shall be more. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| Interesting. Very different from the ending of the first post. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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Spartan Metal battleaxe Is back. Kind of. Since: 11-15-04 Since last post: 90 days Last activity: 79 days |
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| Filler Stitchy...
I woudl read this but I unfortunaly dont have time. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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WhiteRose Warrior Sailor Delerium Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst.  Since: 08-17-04 From: The Dreaming Since last post: 4453 days Last activity: 5157 days |
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| Filler Kitty To the Rescue. I've only read a little bit, but it seems really good. I'm gonna have to come back when I'm fully awake to read the rest. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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Pockets Werewolf pockets Since: 10-20-04 Since last post: 5092 days Last activity: 4609 days |
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| You used my favorite line. I love it.
Better than a sharp stick in the eye. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| On my screen, for some reason, the seperators are question marks. Is that supposed to be there or was it something else?
Anyway, I really like the way you wrote the first part of that. Background info is always fun. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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| They show up as boxes in my post, but in a word processor they are cute little symbols. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| I hate it when symbols don't transfer over. Oh well, so where is the next installment? | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5889 days Last activity: 5154 days |
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| Well I'm having major issues with writing this. since it's semi-based on actual event I really have a hard time picking what's next and it's driving me fucking nuts. I have sort of a plot figured out, but then again I have a few ideas on what I want the ending to be like it's just a matter of getting from here to there. | |||
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WhiteRose Warrior Sailor Delerium Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst. Since: 08-17-04 From: The Dreaming Since last post: 4453 days Last activity: 5157 days |
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| *honk honk* Filler kitty driving through! *honk* Really gotta stop and read this when I have time *drives off* |
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