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Phoenixocracy

The one true Xeodent








Since: 01-08-10
From: Xeomerica

Since last post: 1699 days
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Posted on 08-03-10 02:44 AM Link | Quote
Nine of Phoenix's light orbs faded into nothingness after too much contact with the smaller rocks. One, however, remained to smash into the defensive dome and destroy it.

"Into the ground, huh?" Phoenix said as the smoke cleared. "Ready when you are."

More ash continued to swirl around Phoenix, growing in thickness.

**A ranged attack cannot occur when the opponent is hidden. Good.**
Squire Vince

Storm Eagle
is watching you, he sees your every move.








Since: 04-17-10
From: Victorian London.

Since last post: 4951 days
Last activity: 4925 days
Posted on 08-03-10 02:49 AM Link | Quote
Joe began to think of his next attack. He raised several small plots of land, they started to grow slowly and then they rapidly took off into the sky racing towards Phoenix's figure. The ash was spiraling around him, Joe saw this and reacted by spreading the ash apart with his air manipulation. Phoenix's figure was in sight now. The pillars of land took on the shapes of hands as they raced to grab the being in the air.
Phoenixocracy

The one true Xeodent








Since: 01-08-10
From: Xeomerica

Since last post: 1699 days
Last activity: 1699 days
Posted on 08-03-10 02:59 AM Link | Quote
"Not bad. But not good enough for me."

While Joe had control of the air, Phoenix still had control of the ash. He allowed it to be blown away, only to reform farther away. The ash condensed into coal, taking the shape of small shards. The shards flew towards the area Joe was last seen, spreading out over a fifty meter radius. There was enough ash to have a coal shard every meter apart. The coal would pierce the earth, and then circle in an underground torrent. Anything caught in its wake would be torn to shreds.

Phoenix allowed himself to be caught by the hands, but quickly spewed ash forth to coat his skin an inch thick. He then began to heat his body to volcanic temperatures.

Joe was in for a surprise, if he was still alive down there.
Squire Vince

Storm Eagle
is watching you, he sees your every move.








Since: 04-17-10
From: Victorian London.

Since last post: 4951 days
Last activity: 4925 days
Posted on 08-03-10 03:05 AM Link | Quote
OOC: You're becoming DIAMONDS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

BIC: Joe burst forth from one of the "hands" he had sent at Phoenix. Using the others to get to the rock currently containing his foe. Joe quickly lowered himself and Phoenix to the ground. Joe was going to take them both underground, unless Phoenix gave up his attempted technique,

OOC: That edit was just a grammar thing to lessen any confusion


(Last edited by vince_rigle on 08-03-10 03:31 AM)
Phoenixocracy

The one true Xeodent








Since: 01-08-10
From: Xeomerica

Since last post: 1699 days
Last activity: 1699 days
Posted on 08-03-10 03:31 AM Link | Quote
A smile crept across the face of Phoenix. And then he blew a small flame from his mouth.

While it is true that Coal, when heated, turns into diamonds, ash does not. Ash will combust when flame is added to it, causing an explosion in areas there is no room for the pressure to go.

In this case, that pressure was where the hand was grasping Phoenix's body. The ash coating Phoenix lit on fire, including that under the hand. In an instant, the earth covering him exploded in multiple directions, freeing Phoenix. The immortal was not harmed by this explosion, as it was pure fire.

When freed, Phoenix quickly put distance between the two of them, rocketing the coal shards below the ground towards Joe.
Squire Vince

Storm Eagle
is watching you, he sees your every move.








Since: 04-17-10
From: Victorian London.

Since last post: 4951 days
Last activity: 4925 days
Posted on 08-03-10 03:38 AM Link | Quote
"You're gonna get whooping cough if you keep that up." Joe said with a grin as he raced away from Phoenix. The shards were coming quickly as Joe raced from them. Using his air manipulation Joe spun the air below him into a small tornado. The shards of coal, were swept up in the high powered winds. Joe stood on a slab of rock as the other "hands" circled around him. Then he sent them forward at his opponent while he lowered himself back into the ground.
Phoenixocracy

The one true Xeodent








Since: 01-08-10
From: Xeomerica

Since last post: 1699 days
Last activity: 1699 days
Posted on 08-06-10 07:33 PM Link | Quote
OOC:

Honestly, there is no reason for this training. Your fighting style is great. You have good combination of defense and offense. I must say, this is probably your best character. There isn't really anything to train.

The only you have to work on is your writing. I'm not expecting results fairly soon, but you have the capability. Sit down and write what is happening. Don't think that your are fighting me. Look at it like a story. It is up to you to tell the next part of the story.

I ended this because it hasn't really done anything for you, I think. If it has, awesome. But you already have the skill, just watch your moves and time frame.

Instead of continuing this, I would like you to fight me in the thread I posted for a fight with Samuel. I will continue to hound you about your writing, but I mean the best.

Good job
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