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True Flight The One         Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 101 days Last activity: 101 days |
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| Heavy,
Boots are so heavy, Not as heavy as my shoulders, Exhausting, Carrying the world on my shoulders, I want to cry when I see their faces, They are so happy, They suffer so much, We give and give, Yet it seems nothing has helped stop the attacks, Scared, The alarm sounds and I hide under concrete, What will happen next? I can't see, Nothing, Nothing heard, No explosion. Hot, Just like every day, Walking to work in the heat, In my heavy boots. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 102 days Last activity: 102 days |
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| Simple, yet good. I especially like the beginning. The line about the attacks seems a bit long and deracts a bit from the flow, but that is the only real criticism I can make. | |||
Jakob98 Micro-Goomba Banned Since: 09-09-11 Since last post: 4684 days Last activity: 4244 days |
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| Nice poem |
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