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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie!          Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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"What", Cody grumbled rolling over under his seatbelt, "Did they move?" Chris pulled out his binoculars and inspected the windows across the alley. No movement at all. They must have left overnight. He started the car. "I think they left--let's check the airport just in case," Chris slowly rolled the vehicle past the house and onto the main highway. Cody, his scruffy brown hair falling into his eyes as he slowly woke from his dreamy state, sat uneasily in the passenger seat watching the cars huddle closely around them in the morning traffic. The morning was humid and muggy, almost suffocating if the windows had been rolled down. The air conditioning provided a slight relief. Cody grasped blindly for his coffee cup and took a long, slow sip of the ice-cold thick fluid. "We need more juice," Cody said slurping down the last bit of the liquid, "and I'm not flying the plane this time." Chris sat behind the wheel, one hand on the wheel, the other on the gear shift, starring into the sea of cars. If their targets had fled, they'd be long gone by now. Decided to rewrite it... (Last edited by Zabuza on 05-24-05 05:32 AM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Hmn... mildly intriguing. Please do continue, I'd love to see where you are going with this one. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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The room fell silent and dropped into darkness as the large tritanium shields deployed over all the windows simultaneously. The agent pushed off the window just as the gates began to fall, pushing herself off the far edge of the building floating on the updrafts generated by the valley and the surrounding buildings, flying towards the ground over two hundred floors below. Rewrite again, see below. (Last edited by Zabuza on 10-14-05 05:14 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Wow, another rewrite. Now I am really intrigued. Is this another substory of Paradox Island then? | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| I lost the train of thought for this story. So, it's more of a dead start... | |||
MisturMoogle Thief  Since: 02-02-05 From: U.S.A. Since last post: 6616 days Last activity: 6238 days |
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| Dont you hate it when that happens? You get all into it and stuff and bam, you just loose interest. But its is really good. Let usknow if you decide to start righting again. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| I write all the time, the problem is getting something for Juice. I just keep losing my train of thought. Damn it!
[ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] ...To be continued... 
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License. (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:53 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Wow, it is amazing just how drastically this story changes everytime. I like the way that this one is going though... and now the title makes a bit more sense. I do hope you write more on this. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:54 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Ah, a way to work in the Prius, nice touch! I just find that whole thing rather humorous with him just killing the guy and so easily making him cease to exist. That is talent! | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Filler Kitty post... now post more or be forever doomed!! | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Oh dear... this shall be interesting. I think it is funny how you have Ed getting distracted by the Japanese car all the time, especially since I've seen people do that. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Oh dear, the police are after him now... this is going to get really interesting... write more!! | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| So she has a problem with her father, huh? Interesting. But why would they not give him back his knife if the only blood on it was his? That makes no sense. Can they do that? | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 1064 days Last activity: 1064 days |
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| [ ENTRY TO NANOWRIMO, POSSIBLY. ] (Last edited by Stitch on 11-03-08 02:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 230 days |
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| Hmn, interesting... but what did he do with the glock?
Hopefully there is a good explaination coming up as to how the CIA is involved. Yes? |
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