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Makura        Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| I figured since I write so much poetry that I should just post the ones that aren't total shit. I'm not going to post any of my past poetry but anything that I write from now on, that isn't total shit, I'll post.
Here's one I wrote last night. (It needs a title I'm open for suggestions.) A heart's first beat Love that let's you fly Truly an awesome feat Feels so good to cry Fear is present Sinking into the core Never been so pleasant Never hurt so good before Can't wait to feel the pain To be so far gone As long as you remain Torture is undone |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Hmn... it's hard to come up with a title for this one. I like it though... it's one of those "aww, how cute!" things.
If all else fails you could go with 'Torture undone' |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| Yeah, that'll work. I wanted to make it one of those, "Aww.. How cute things without losing my slightly dark touch."
Torture Undone.. I like it. I need filler! (Last edited by Makura on 05-18-05 05:55 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Yay, I am useful!
Heh heh, filler kitty at your service, ma'am! *bows* |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| This is kind of an old one, but it is one of my favorites.
I'm content here with our nothingness. My candle burns, in this room of mine. It gives me comfort, peace of mind. Downstairs, not fifty feet away, in the fireplace roar your oh so awesome flames. I'm jealous, I must admit. Suddenly my little candle looks so pathetic. There you go again,had to do me one better. When will this end? Our competition has to stop. And to think, you want us to be child and parent, instead of criminal and cop. I'm content here with our nothingness. When you invite me down to enjoy your fire I shake my head and, to myself, I confess, I like my little candle, in my little darkened room. In this world of lonsome bliss I'm content here with our nothingness. ____________________________________________________________________ And, this one is how I feel as of late. Save Me I don't know how I feel can't express my emotion I don't know if this is real Don't have the slightest notion These wounds will never heal I can't breathe The air is too much of a fight I can't see Too blinded by the light Too burdened by the grief I need your help, your aid Please find my soul It I will trade This life I must control My life I must save. (Last edited by Makura on 05-22-05 11:05 PM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Mrow? Interesting. I really like those two. | |||
Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt  Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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| Usually un-titles poems should just be titles 'un-titled'
Im a poet myself and makura, thats great writing from the heart, i feel ya man! maybe i should share my poetry on here..... |
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Clathana Magician  Since: 05-15-05 From: In the kitchen eating all the food!!!!!!!!MMM YUMMY! Since last post: 6699 days Last activity: 6699 days |
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| Wow good poems Makura I like the 2nd one the best but the 1st one is also good.I don't really like to right poems but sometimes i create my own little stories or something lol | |||
Angel of Deceit Archer Since: 04-15-05 From: I thought you knew thats why I asked. Since last post: 7078 days Last activity: 6988 days |
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| Those are some good poems Makura. You're really good at writing them. Dang I should have goten you to help me right some for my Literature class...maybe i could have goten a higher grade. XD | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| But that would be cheating... and that's bad. Heh heh. I've discovered a way to post Ashes of Envy at last I think, so time for a payback with the filler posts and comments. | |||
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caxama Archer  Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6660 days Last activity: 6273 days |
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| The poems are really great, you have such talent. I really like the last one. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| forever caught in it all
from a top a building floating in an angry fall now I'm giving in to what I never felt before next will be my time never felt so alive in a time so short feels so wonderful, like a dream falling and falling and falling force pushed me over, it was mean now I say in my last mortal musing numbness was no way to live next, I go, to my choosing feel while you live , you won't regret it forget my example for it took death for me to get life's gift Dreamland My dreams are neverending. Memories that haunt my ever so innocent sleep. You see, they aren't dreams at all. But, tortursome recallections. You must have assumed, dreamland was a place of fantastic wonders. For most people that may be true. It is for most what I wish it was for me. A glowing field of rainbows. Birds singing whole heartedly, with glee. Fairies fluttering about a vast magical forrest. A place where even the wolves are amongst the kindest of creatures. But my version... Booming thunder. Tiny spherical tears of rain fall. Monstrous sized screens all around me. All playing out different scenes. Recognized to be the hell that was once my life. On one screen a fight, a hand drawing back prepared to strike. On another, a familiar terrored face..my brother. I have hope of living happily ever after, even if not activiley involved. One day dreams, although still neverending, will be pleasant and dreamland will be forever happily pretending. (Last edited by Makura on 08-01-05 09:08 PM) |
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Spartan Metal battleaxe Is back. Kind of. Since: 11-15-04 Since last post: 88 days Last activity: 77 days |
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| And you were worried about posting Total shit...Shame on you...
You are a really interesting person Makura.... |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| This is for all of my friends and family:
For all the times... For all the times you said I love you and showed how much you care For all the times you held me close when life did not seem fair For all the times you gave me support and especially your love For all of the above I値l make you proud for years to come I値l grow up wise and strong I値l value integrity I値l admit when I知 wrong Most of all I値l remember what you taught me and the mark it left on my life For all of the above I give you appreciation and endless love Even that is not enough |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Aww, that is so sweet!! Almost uncharacteristic of you, but very touching. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| Thanks.You'll like this one.
Hurt me where my soul won't feel. Cut me where I'm already scarred. Bite me where I won't bleed. Weaken a place that it strong. Trust me this is what I need. Hurt me where my soul won't feel it. Cut me where I'm already scarred. Bite me where I won't bleed. Weaken a place that it strong. Take me back to the person I used to be. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| Nice, I identify with that one fairly well actually. And I really like the flow you created with the rhyming fifth lines! | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| Thank's I'm glad you liked it. | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| It calls to the masochist in me I guess. And looky, now I've made it possible for you to write more. Tee hee! | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5886 days Last activity: 5151 days |
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| Can you see me?
See through this opaque act I put them through? Can you see me? I think you do. Can you see me? I'm trying to let you. I came clean. About loving you. I came clean. I told the truth. Bring me to rescue. You see me. I know you do. What kills me. Is I see you too. Are you afraid I'll rescue you? |
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