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Xeogaming Forums - Story Realm - Makura's Poetry |
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Savedox![]() Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4638 days Last activity: 1727 days |
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I can see you and Im afraid that you have already rescued me.... So yea....
*hugs* |
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Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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*uber huggles*
Here is my new one. Can you find the hidden message? Ghastly is this empty form Under imitated thought and hope Against all pain that wraps your heart Regardless of how it turns on me Desperate to do what makes me feel whole I will protect you And it will be my only solace Never seize until you�re free And even in the darkest times Nothing will barricade my path Ghastly was this empty form, until I heard the truth Enter what is left of my soul Label me, Guardian Angel |
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Elara![]() Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 194 days Last activity: 194 days |
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Aww, that is cute. And very true as well... though I think you have more of your soul left than you let on. | |||
Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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left of my soul has two meanings..for some reason I wanted to put heart but it didn't flow, so what's left of my soul would be my heart *shrugs* ![]() |
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Savedox![]() Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4638 days Last activity: 1727 days |
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I see the secret message... XD... hahaha if you cant your funny lol...
*hugs makura* can I be your Guardian Angel.....? |
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Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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*huggles* Of course you can, honey.
New poem coming soon, I need to type the damn thing. |
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Elara![]() Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 194 days Last activity: 194 days |
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*filler kitty walks by*
Well, get to writing then, damn you! I figured much on the soul/heart thing, and my comment still stands. |
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Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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Words cannot describe
and that's the beauty of it. This marvelous feeling I feel inside grows increasingly stronger every minute. What we share we definitely can't explain. I know of no way to tell you, and that's okay. I know you feel what I do too. It's absolutely unique to you and I and is left better unsaid. The only reason why is because our love says it over and over again. The task of articulation, is one too tough. Words just can't decribe. Even though they're not good enough it's nice to know they tried. |
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Savedox![]() Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4638 days Last activity: 1727 days |
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I think that this one is great, keep them comeing...
*hugs* |
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Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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I'm so glad you like it, love. | |||
Elara![]() Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 194 days Last activity: 194 days |
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MORE!!! I know you have more, post!! | |||
Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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The, not yet, new me. New Heart. New Faith. New Love. New Grace. I have started over. My Existence never mattered. Not a Ripple in the water. Not a Trace of movement in the sand. Until the day I held You. Hand intertwined in Hand. Vivid is the Image in my head. Soul warm Body too Eyes fixed, Locked on You Impossibly close, I draw nearer. Breath hot Nervous gasps. Not loud enough to reveal my Fear. Then You too draw nearer. A Spark is lit. We�re touching Lips. And then I open my eyes. Darkness. I whisper to myself. That day is Soon to come. Until Then. No Heart. No Faith. No Love. No Grace. I can�t start over yet. My Existence never mattered. Not a Ripple in the water. Not a Trace of movement in the sand. Don�t fret, Love. You give me hope. And that�s more than I�ll ever need. |
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caxama![]() Archer ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6754 days Last activity: 6367 days |
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I like both of your poems. Actually, I always like your work. They are always so beautiful, and there are times when I believe that darkness, with all its' secrets, is more beautiful than the sometimes harsh planes of light.
You have an incredible talent, not many can put thought and emotion into words, let alone make it beautiful. You have my respect. And for that, I would bow to you. |
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Elara![]() Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 194 days Last activity: 194 days |
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Aww, it is the cuteness! I like that last one. | |||
Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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I question who I am
Question if I ever knew Under everything I seem to be Everything is so confused Searching myself gets me nowhere Time goes on, and still, nothing I only have these broken thoughts Oblivious to things most obvious Novice to my own sad life Wandering, wondering if certainty is near Hope is my only solace On the journey of self discovery I question who I am And perhaps I�ll never know My journey is never-ending ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Music isn�t loud enough It doesn�t blast away my pain Just make everything go away Pulse into my veins Find it�s way poked through flesh Just make everything go away Now. Just make it Stop. Just make everything go away I bite my tongue until bleeds In my fists my heart beats Just make everything go away I�m tired I want to sleep Just make everything go away I want to get high I want to cut myself Just make everything go away I'll Sleep until the world has died I want to be alone Just make everything go away Now Please Just make everything go away Take it away, I don�t care I�m not going anywhere I'm retarded. Secret Message in the first. Find it. comment. Bye (Last edited by Makura on 01-20-06 07:15 PM) |
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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4943 days Last activity: 4566 days |
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Hmm. You do the same thing I do in some of my school-based poems to freak with their minds.
"I question who I am" First letter in every line. Hmm? Self-discovery is important. I hope you find the answer. |
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Elara![]() Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 194 days Last activity: 194 days |
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*huggles*
You'll be questioning things for a long while more... I still am on many things. But you'll make it... just no more cutting, please. |
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Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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I promise, no more. And my Questioning poem was a school assignment. | |||
Broken Dreams![]() Thief ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 05-29-05 From: California Since last post: 6720 days Last activity: 6720 days |
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damn girl you are truly kick ass, not only is your realy life name like mine, we have the same taste of music in everything, and I just want you to know, even if we dont know eachother in real life, I think from how you express yourself, your an awesome person and make lovely poems. | |||
Makura![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5981 days Last activity: 5246 days |
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Thanks. I'm glad you like them. And you're right, we do have a lot in common. |
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