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caxama Archer          Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6660 days Last activity: 6273 days |
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And their patterns Placed carefully In emptiness Deepen into Stained glass sound And lightest movement. Flow of subtle water, Base of subtle earth, Transparency of subtle air, Glow of subtle fire, Such notes In a quiet mind Take feeling Into greatest depths of beauty. Essences of beauty energy, Transluscent spells |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 99 days Last activity: 99 days |
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| I like the use of the elements. Some of the two-word lines make seem odd at first, but the flow doesn't seem too disturbed by them. Great work! | |||
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6660 days Last activity: 6273 days |
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| Thanks, I tried to make it sound like the thoughts that went through my head, each one individual but connected.
Glad you liked it. |
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