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caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 01-13-06 03:13 PM Link | Quote
Notes
And their patterns
Placed carefully
In emptiness
Deepen into
Stained glass sound
And lightest movement.

Flow of subtle water,
Base of subtle earth,
Transparency of subtle air,
Glow of subtle fire,
Such notes
In a quiet mind
Take feeling
Into greatest depths of beauty.

Essences of beauty energy,
Transluscent spells
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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 01-14-06 07:54 PM Link | Quote
I like the use of the elements. Some of the two-word lines make seem odd at first, but the flow doesn't seem too disturbed by them. Great work!
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

Since last post: 6660 days
Last activity: 6273 days
Posted on 01-24-06 10:31 AM Link | Quote
Thanks, I tried to make it sound like the thoughts that went through my head, each one individual but connected.

Glad you liked it.
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