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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt          Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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From the tears of a newborn Lotus Lyrics By: Dale Hall Vocals By: Dale Hall Sixth condemned by that loved one Forever falling, never recovering A barrier penetrated by God’s new light Ruled over the breath of a testimony bright. THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR! FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN, YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY, FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION! Hollow wars beckon within the newborn Constantly threatened, never moving. Like a chilled oppression of my absolution Take its stems that were once created from this conclusion… THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR! FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN, YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY, FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION! “And so it came to pass that resurrection within me shall become anew, Like a shallow grave from the dying phoenix shall become once again resurrected into a stronger more absolute being…but too soon fell from this telled heart…” THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR! FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN, YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY, FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION! Reflect upon the mirrors of the dews Sudden swallows and heafty crews. Her burden swells my yolk and the age defers… ITS ALL IN MOMENT, ENOUGH OF THE LIES! (Repeat X2) THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR! FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN, YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY, FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION! “CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW LIAR!? I CAN FEEL YOUR HATRED! ENOUGH OF THESE TEARS! FORGIVING YOUR PATHETIC TELLED HEART WILL NEVER COMPLETE THE ANGER THAT FEEDS MY ADDICTION!” (Last edited by Sajin Gorotto on 01-22-06 11:37 PM) |
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Broken Dreams Thief  Since: 05-29-05 From: California Since last post: 6625 days Last activity: 6625 days |
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| very angry and sad lyrics but I like it, good job | |||
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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| You should have heard me on the microphone when I first tried that song...The Drummer, Frenning, was toatally amazed on what I can actually do when it comes to singing and screaming....cant sing good, but I can sure as hell give those dull growls everyone knows and loves....
Hopefully if I get the songs recorded on a better computer, someday Ill post the songs recorded on here someday...but for now, these are meer poetry from my "Beloved" heart... |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 100 days Last activity: 100 days |
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| My only constructive criticism is that the first line of the chorus sounds weird, like it's missing a word or something. Unless you can explain what it means by "tears forever pillar".
Good otherwise. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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Originally posted by Elara Meaning tears are forever piling up like pillars...its basicially emphsizing that I cry alot... |
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