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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie!          Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 946 days Last activity: 946 days |
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| I sit.
in the corner of my room. bathed in the clarity of darkness. in a shroud of discontent. aware of my insecurities. aware of the origins of my dilusions. contemplative of the future. of my being. of desire. I sit. and watch. and dream. numbness trickles through me. a fire burns within. moving upwards and outward. expanding and flowing. the darkness invites. but. I sit. On another unrelated note: this is my 1100th post. Yay! Binary! (Last edited by Zabuza on 03-05-06 06:29 AM) |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 113 days Last activity: 113 days |
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| Interesting. I like the use of one line stanzas, it cna sometimes give a poem a jerky feel, but here it makes the flow quite nice and sorta building. The end is very curt though, yet at the same time I like how it ends as it began. | |||
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Stitch Roy Koopa Holy crap, it is the RoboCoonie! Since: 08-20-04 From: California Since last post: 946 days Last activity: 946 days |
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| I don't even remember why I wrote this one, but I know that some emotion or darkness invaded me and I just began to write in a pattern that reflected the blunt force of my emotion. Or, maybe, my butt was numb. |
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