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Rauni        Since: 08-14-04 Since last post: 1545 days Last activity: 1545 days |
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Nathan Artwork 1 ~Not Colored~ Please notes that I am not going accept comments that are: "I wish I could draw like you," or "Your arts are bas-ass, how did you do that?" I also won't accept any extreme hard-core comment from someone who does not like me. In fact, if you are one of the person who doesn't like me at all (even have any barely slight feeling against me), don't bother posting here. (Because I had enough problems with people nowaday.) Also, for futher notice, I thought of making a comic or graphic novel althrough I highly suggest not to get your hopes up. I may sound rude, but only because I am contantly sick of how many people are basically assuming that everything they drew are good. Or not "actual" helping a person (like me). I'll update the list if I can (if new arts are in). |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt  Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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| Looks like Kurama from yu Yu Hakusho with a touch of Sephiroth...at least...I see it anyway...I think its the hair...
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You might need to add shading when doing the hair...Looked flat to me Other than that I like it, Great Job |
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Rauni Since: 08-14-04 Since last post: 1545 days Last activity: 1545 days |
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| Oh, I even forgot... If you are giving comment (things that you see something wrong with the art), PLEASE... PLEASE don't put it in a spoiler tag. Just put it this type of format:
Art Name: (Nathan - 1) Description: (Insert what do you think is needed fixing and reasons why.) This way, it make thing alot easier for me to observes the problem and fixing. Please notes that I won't upgrade the actual art itself, it is just the information that informs me what to do or not to do the next time. Sajin, the hair are basically fine. I don't add many detail straight unless I find it to be "more benefital" and "official" to add shading and something to make him look better. It takes time for me to find a real "official" artwork where then I added many shading and so forth... Maybe I should include little comment on my own art as well as I explained why I didn't do certain part as well. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4556 days Last activity: 4550 days |
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| I know the hair is fine dude, Its just my personal opinion...Im not telling you HOW to improve or what you need to improve...Its my opinion...
I would be a smart ass right now, but I wish to be respectable as possiable with your artwork...But what your doing dude is making a mountain out of a molehill on how we should post on our critique`... The spoiler tag was my personal motive...But for respect, I wont do it anymore. Art Name: (Nathan-1) Description: Needs shading, the head is too big, eyes arent in good detail (I mean, you have the left eye, theres almost just enough hair on the left side than there is the right...so why one eye?)...The only "Good" thing that impresses me is the fact that the jacket moves with the hair...as if wind is blowing... All in all, its good sketching...You need to color it so I can give my final Judgement Edit- Made spelling corrections (Last edited by Sajin of the Gorotto Sea on 03-23-06 04:16 PM) |
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