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Stitch

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Since: 08-20-04
From: California

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Posted on 04-19-06 11:18 PM Link | Quote
i've been spending days sitting in front of my computer contemplating the thoughts running through my head...

...each thought crashing into another thought exploding into an array of useless information...

...trying to make sense of the bits and pieces...

...hoping to place them together in their jigsaw fashion to create the masterpiece I've been waiting to create...

...but it doesn't happen. The pictures and videos rest on my computer, in my camera, and the music doesn't fit...

...I don't know what I want to do. I don't have scope of the project. I know not what to do...

...it's a moment of lucidity that escapes me. A moment of sheer sanity that brings everything into perspective, yet...

...I'm all alone. Thanks for reading.


The beauty of this poem is that it doesn't have to be read in order to make sense. Hence why they move in different directions. It allows your eyes to pick what they want to read next.


(Last edited by Zabuza on 04-20-06 07:07 AM)
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Since: 08-17-04
From: The Dreaming

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Posted on 04-20-06 01:51 AM Link | Quote
Wow, that was really wonderful Zabuza. Not just the poem (which was beautiful on it's own), but the fact that it can be read in any order and even the way younposted it. Seeing it on plaing paper, just standing still wouldn't have done it justice.
Stitch

Roy Koopa
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Since: 08-20-04
From: California

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Posted on 04-20-06 05:45 AM Link | Quote
I figured this was the closest I could simulate to sentences running through my head without creating word explosions (that would require JavaScript).
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Since: 09-05-04
From: His Laughin' Place

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Posted on 04-20-06 08:33 AM Link | Quote
The marquees gave me a headache...I had to view the page source...and then THAT gave me a headache...and then I just hit reply, then read your poem, and my headche went away...

Very clever, poetic in the digital point of view...I liked it
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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 04-20-06 05:12 PM Link | Quote
That is cool Zabuza... it does mess with the eyes a bit though... but I do truly like the way it can be read in any order, and the poem itself is good too.
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